Blueprint forgot
the number
This is a genuinely handsome pouch: restrained, premium, unmistakably its own brand. It is also silent about the one thing a protein shopper is scanning for. There is no protein number anywhere on the front, on a shelf where every single winning main heroes a printed stat.
What the current main gets right
Credit first: the texture window strip showing real chocolate powder is the strongest cue on the pack, and the minimal navy aesthetic is distinctive in a loud category. But the wordmark is spelled out in faint gridded letters that barely read at a glance, the benefit claims are tiny outlined pills, and the only number on the front is a net weight. Distinctive is not the same as merchandised.
At this size the current main is a dark square with a stripe. The rebuild reads as chocolate protein, 26 grams, certified. One of these earns the click.
The shelf math
The read is not opinion. Every winning main on this shelf was decomposed into its elements; the rebuild follows the adoption data.
The three moves
Print the number
Pour the shake
Show the seals
What the rebuild does not do
It does not invent a claim or dress the pack in someone else's badges. The 26 grams comes from the listing's own stated protein content. Vegan, non-GMO, and third-party tested are claims the brand already makes, consolidated into one contained seal. The chocolate is the named flavor on the pouch. Everything asserted in Exhibit B is something Blueprint already owns.
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